my first page

well here we go...my first comic page..and I dislike it...alot
I think i did a terrible job...if anyone has any tips that they would like to give please give it....I dont mind...as long as it isnt flaming... any ways so yeah slow begining....tried to humor it up a little if you didnt notice....:/
introducing Sparx fellow team striker bounty hunter...
well I hope you all like it...^_^